LEGO Classic Creative Ocean Fun 11018 Building Kit; With 6 Mini Builds, Including a Viking Ship and a Yellow Submarine, Plus Extra Bricks for Imaginative Play; Educational Toy for Ages 4+ (333 Pieces)

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Line 40 – Is ‘signed’ the correct word to use here? This sentence is confusing to me. Suggest rewording. Its unclear to me how protecting natural biodiversity avoids pandemics. Line 493 - 494: What does it mean to be incalculable? If true, how would you demonstrate it is valuable?

line 15, line 47, could use more recent references. Much has been written on ecosystem functioning and marine biodiversity since Worm et al 2006. Line 57 to 76 could be structured better, too many references, too long sentences, hard to understand what the literature is saying with all of it in one long sentence with so many references. Indeed, our vision for inclusive and sustainable Indigenous performing arts pedagogies builds on transgressive learning. Through transgressive and eco-creative learning approaches, in parallel to the co-creation of the nature-based structures, researchers regularly engage with knowledge bearers, educators and learners to generate new forms of eco-knowledge and learning material through the science, arts and music. Researchers closely document testimonials throughout the co-design, manufacturing and testing of the nature-based structures. These interactions form the core mediators among all objectives of the research and will be translated into shared TCEs as transgressive pedagogical tools for communicable science. Transgressive eco-creative pedagogical intervention are aimed to empower the community and revalue Indigenous ways of knowing and being by giving the knowledge bearers agency as well as by disseminating the developing knowledge in accessible and creative ways. The value and sustainability of this kind of knowledge and pedagogical approach is incalculable. Pedagogically, the development of Indigenous and transgressive learning approaches adds to the emerging data on STEAM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Arts and Mathematics) learning education, a proposed goal of curriculum development (Barajas-López and Bang, Reference Barajas-López and Bang2018; O’Connor, Reference O’Connor, Corbett and Gereluk2020). Lines 128 - 131: Designing solutions to allow urban shorelines to enhance/recover these functions potentially comes at a social cost - wouldn’t a more efficient approach be to balance the value of these functions against the cost of restoring them? Here is a collection of 15 creative, ocean themed activities for kids to enjoy this summer, with ideas for play, learning, art and cooking!

Line 352a - community participatory action Benefit-sharing – this title could be more explanatory of the section. Why is benefit capitalised? The ocean has always been a source of wonder and inspiration. It has been described in countless ways by poets, travelers, scientists, and dreamers alike. We hope you enjoyed this blog running through some brilliant World Ocean Day activities for preschoolers. Be sure to let us know how you’re getting on with our resources by leaving a comment in the review boxes - we love to hear from you! Some students may never have seen the ocean before, so describing oceans can be challenging, particularly for younger writers.

Line 300 Some more references on where plant material has been used for craft making, weaving, particularly on development/conservation projects etc would be good, this reference is old. Oceans also have a very distinct smell. Consider incorporating that element into your writing by focusing on characters smelling the ocean’s saltiness in the air. Ocean Writing Even If You’ve Never Seen One Maybe creating a memory of writing in the waves of the ocean will turn out to be therapeutic for you or for your student writers. Plus, you’ll improve your writing skills in the process. Line 25 – give global average rate of Sea level rise (Ipcc 2019) rather than saying levels have increased significantly Line 322-323 – reiterate why and explain what the approaches are needed for – more linkage to the coastal nature-based solutions here would be help integrate the broad themes of the review

You might wonder, what does researching fun facts and data about the ocean have to do with writing about oceans accurately? Considering the importance of water to human life, it is very helpful to know how to write about oceans and other water sources accurately in your writing. In addition, you’ll find some fictional pieces that beautifully incorporate the ocean into the story – sometimes as a character – like Ernest Hemingway’s critically acclaimed novel, The Old Man and the Sea.